it was a night at achotti
laying limply at the tapri cot
i observed the stars shining above
in a clusters of million some
shone brightly standing out
when i compared them to world
these were the people who were
called the achievers bcoz
they had done something that
mattered to many and changed
the way many thought and lived....
when i compared them to life
these were the people who were
my true friends who stood out
bcoz i knew i could look forward to
them in any trouble
even if far away, there ideas
would enlighten my way of life
then slowly thinking if i was
one of these stars in someone's life
and in the world to come
i dazed away , the stars fading away
but still always present there...
still always present there...
_prashant(greymater)
4 comments:
hey prashant!!
gr8 work...
u will surely achieve a lot in ur life but u r already an achiever, the brightest star in the life of every person in ur life...
keep shining coz ur light enlightens the life of all...
wherever v may be...whenevr i'll luk at the sky, i'll search the brightest star n feel its u smiling at me... :)
loads of luck to u
-sonia
1st of all congrats to you .....the blog is gr8 and all your poems are commendable.May somebody that special keep inspiring you all your life so that you keep pouring such beautiful poems :)
take care
all the best
adios
well thanks sonia...that was really nice of u...
i hope to see u thre always looking at me!!!1... :)
n yes shreya,,,,i too hope tat i kep getting inspired all my life... n bring about some good work for u all to appreciate..thanks fr the comments
take care...
njoy writing all!!!
indeed a nice tryst ,parsu..!
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